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"Writers encouraging writers"

 

 

Friday, July 04, 2008

This page contains upcoming contest announcements, as well as the names of winners in contests sponsored by Saturday Writers since its very first contest in 2002. 

We keep the judges' comments and names of the winners posted so the winners can return to see their names in print -- yet another way of "writers encouraging writers."

DRUM ROLL, PLEASE

While other contests might offer prize money, the Saturday Writers' Short Story Contests offers you the opportunity to win prize money AND have your story considered for publication in our acclaimed CUIVRE RIVER ANTHOLOGY.

Read below how you can become "rich AND famous"!

7th Annual Saturday Writers' Short Story Contest 2008

Submission Guidelines

 

DEADLINE: Postmarked by September 15, 2008

ENTRY FEE: $5 per entry, maximum of three entries. Submissions without entry fee or inadequate fee will be discarded or returned to contestant if SASE is provided. 

PRIZES: 1st Place $100

               2nd Place $50

               3rd Place $25

               4th Place – 10th certificates

 RULES: 

  1. Open subject, open genre. (No pornography or gore.)
  2. Unpublished at time of submission, original work of contestant.
  3. Standard manuscript form: 8 1/2 x 11 paper, typed and double-spaced, pages numbered and title of entry on every page, 12 point Times New Roman.
  4. No more than 2,008 words, excluding title.
  5. Two copies of each entry, paper clips only—no staples.
  6. Cover sheet for each story, with contestant’s name, address, phone number, email (if you have one), and title of entry. (Name may only appear on cover sheet, not manuscript.)
  7. Postmarked no later than September 15, 2008. DO NOT SEND BY CERTIFIED MAIL!
  8. Mail flat, not folded, with sufficient postage to:

       Saturday Writers 2008 Short Story Contest                                                                  

       c/o Tricia Sanders

       90 Westwood Trails

       Foristell, MO 63348 

  1. Checks payable to: Saturday Writers.

Top ten winners may be given the opportunity to have a story included (one-time rights) in Saturday Writers’ literary anthology, published the following year.

 Contest is open to everyone, both members of Saturday Writers and non-members. For a list of winners, check our website: www.saturdaywriters.org after October 31, 2008.

Decision of the judges is final. Not responsible for lost or misdirected entries. Winners will be announced in the Saturday Writers newsletter. Manuscripts will not be returned

 Read more about our past issues of CUIVRE RIVER ANTHOLOGY on our ANTHOLOGY page or visit Amazon.com.

Here are some suggestions from past judges:

Read the submission guidelines carefully.

Your story should be fiction; don't send essays or poetry.

Your story should have a beginning, a middle, and an end.

Revise, revise, revise.

Read your story out loud before sending it.

If you have to check the Thesaurus or you can't pronounce it, it's probably not the right word to use.

Speaking of words, do not exceed the word limit.

Hook us with an amazing first line.

We love clever titles and unusual (but not too bizarre) character names.

We love a touch of humor, but not obscenity.

Surprise and delight us.

Make us laugh or make us cry, but most of all make us remember your story.

Make sure your dialogue sounds realistic.

Use strong verbs and nouns and concrete words.

Go light on the adjectives and even lighter on the adverbs.

Appeal to our five senses: sight, sound, smell, touch, taste.

Check out CUIVRE RIVER ANTHOLOGY to read some stories that have won in the past.

And once again . . . read the submission guidelines carefully.

Good luck!

 

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Congratulations to Dianna Graveman and Stan Wilson, winners of THE HOST by Stephenie Meyers. Stan and Dianna's reviews are posted on our REVIEWS page.

Congratulations, Doyle Suit, for winning a copy of THE DEVIL MAY CARE. Read his review on our REVIEWS page.

 

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Here are some more submission opportunities and contest information, courtesy of Saturday Writers

 

This call out is courtesy of Dianna Graveman.

THIN THREAD http://www.kiwipublishing.com/content/Thin-Threads-Submission-Guidelines.html

Kiwi Publishing invites you to contribute a true story, article, or anecdote that will bring hope and happiness to all those who realize the possibility in each moment, and the unseen miracles that arise from overcoming what seem like setbacks.  By sharing special moments, from surprising, loving and inspiring to traumatic, these stories will touch people around the world. Topics will include: Thin Threads(TM) of: Survival, Romance, Opportunity, Sport Success, Courage,  Leadership & Innovation, Forgiveness, Motherhood, Fatherhood, Patriotism, Business Success and any other story that offers hope from a Thin Thread(TM) moment. Should your story be selected and be included in the "Thin Thread"(TM) book series, a permission fee of $100 will be paid. The submission deadline is
July 1, 2008

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For all you mystery writers, check these two contests in conjunction with the Tony Hillerman Writers Conference and Wordharvest. One contest is for mystery short stories (Deadline Sep 15) and the other for mystery novels (Deadline July 1). Both contests offer big prizes. Click on the link above for complete details.

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Deadline July 31, 2008. Amazing Story Fiction Contest, sponsored by  www.thewritehelper.com

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Deadline September 30, 2008, Hamilton, Ohio, Writers Guild 2008 Fiction Contest.  www.hamiltonwritersguild.org

 

 

 

Here are the winners of our 2008 Saturday Writers' One-page Poem Contest:

1st place - Awakenings,  Nancy Tupper Ling, Walpole, MA
2nd place - Milne St., New Orleans, 1986,  Jane Stubbs, New Orleans, LA 
3rd place - Wired Up, Edward Boccia, St. Louis, MO
4th place - Messaging, Linda Maxwell, Richmond, KY
5th place - Chernobyl: Carnival, Meagan McDaniel, Mobile, AL
6th place - The Woman Next Door, Faye Williams Jones, AR
7th place - Grandma's Paperweight, Jerrel Swingle, O’Fallon,  MO
8th place - Pimple Medicine, Linda Maxwell, Richmond, KY
9th place - Pablo Wrote a Word, Mary Horner, St. Peters, MO
10th place - The Pick up, Lori Becherer, Millstadt, IL

Notable Entries (In no particular order)

Close Enough to Touch, Faye Williams Jones, North Little Rock, AR
DP In The Refrigerator, Ed Hennessy, Biloxi, MS
Spoons, Kathryn Veres, Woodland Park, CO
The Secret Clan of Women, Faye Williams Jones, North Little Rock, AR
DFW, Linda Maxwell, Richmond, KY
The Veil of Unknowing, Joyce Gregor, Westcliffe, CO
Painting Autumn Leaves, Thomas Lynn, Lawrenceville, GA
Sky Song, Jerrel Swingle, O’Fallon, MO
A review of the situation, Catherine Moran, Little Rock, AR
Work in Progress, Cheryl Loetscher, Littleton, CO
Should Have Been a Boy, Ellaraine Lockie, Sunnyvale, CA
What to watch for , Catherine Moran, Little Rock, AR

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MORE CONTEST RESULTS

 

Read below to find out the results of Saturday Writer contests from 2002-2007.

Saturday Writers 2007 Teen Short Story contest judge, Donna Volkenannt, has completed judging the 75 entries in our third annual teen's short story contest.

Drum roll, please . . . And the winners are:

2007 Teen Short Story Top Ten Winners:

1. "The Winner" by Hanna Alfier of Lutheran High School, 12th grade Mrs. Staude's class
2. "The Sound of Our Souls" by Nicole Pastor of Troy Buchanan High School, 10th grade
3. "Life with Kit" by Tyler Orf of St. Peter Catholic School, 7th grade Mrs. Taylor's class
4. "One Man Standing" by Emily Moore of Christian High School, 12th grade Mrs. Grube's class
5. "The Book of Life" by Aaron Loesel of Lutheran High School, 12th grade Mrs. Staude's class
6. "Night Warriors" by Anthony Gribbins of Duchesne High School, 9th grade Mrs. O'Donnell's class
7. "Elizabeth's Adventure" by Jessica Ferkel of Christian High School, 11th grade Mrs. Dampf's class
8. "Cinderella" by Katy Zeisler of St. Peter Catholic School, 8th grade Mrs. Taylor's class
9. "The Traitor" by Adam Whiteside of Duchesne High School, 9th grade Mrs. O'Donnell's class
10. "2758" by Matt Michalak of St. Peter Catholic School, 8th grade Mrs. Taylor's class

Honorable Mentions (in no particular order):

"The Reign of the Wolves" by Tessa Grissom of Wentzville Middle School, 8th grade Mrs. Cox's class
"Test Stages" by Nicholas Wilder of St. Peter Catholic School, 7th grade Mrs. Taylor's class
"Happy Place" by Alexandria Cova of Duchesne High School, 9th grade Mrs. O'Donnell's class
"The House" by Katie Winterowd of Duchesne High School, 9th grade Mrs. O'Donnell's class
"Monday Morning Sun" by Jenny Howard of Duchesne High School, 9th grade Mrs. O'Donnell's class
"The Haunted Hayride" by Ally Strunk of Duchesne High School, 9th grade Mrs. O'Donnell's class
"Collision" by Julie Wilcox of Duchesne High School, 9th grade Mrs. O'Donnell's class
"Just a Matter of Trust" by Jenifer Tindle of Barnwell Middle School, 8th grade Mrs. Griggs' class
"Big Little Brother" by Brad Zaricor of Mary Emily Bryan Middle School, 8th grade Ms. Freeman's class
"A Day in the Life of an Original Gangster" by Mike Hall of Lutheran High School, 12th grade Mrs. Staude's class
"The Vegetable War" by Philip Michalak of St. Peter Catholic School, 7th grade Mrs. Taylor's class
"Rory's Story" by Greg Renna of Duchesne High School, 9th grade Mrs. O'Donnell's class
"Inkblots and Writers' Block" by Rachel Doyle of Duchesne High School, 9th grade Mrs. O'Donnell's class

Here are Donna's comments about this year's entries:

It was such a joy to read all of the wonderful stories submitted in the Saturday Writers 2007 Teen’s Short Story Contest. Picking only ten out of 75 submissions was not easy because so many of the entries were filled with energy and creativity! 

 

I hope the contest chair will forgive me, but there were so many wonderful stories that I felt more than ten should be recognized, so I included an additional baker's dozen -- 13 honorable mentions -- along with the top ten.

 

Each and every one of the 75 entries had something going for it, whether it was a clever title, an unusual voice, a touch of humor, energy, engaging characters, realistic dialogue, a memorable story line, playfulness, innocence, sadness, passion, or vivid description.  Some brought a smile to my face. Others made me laugh out loud. A few made me feel sad, to the point that I imagined how painful, at times, it must be to be a teenager.

 

There were several entries I didn’t think were stories at all; they were essays or narratives with little or no dialogue and no strong voice or sense of character. While the writing may have been good in these submissions, what the contest was designed for, and I was looking for, was a story—with a beginning, a middle, and an end, where something happens to someone, where conflict occurs, and someone or something changes by the end of the story.

 

The stories that rose to the top of my list are there not only because of the writing itself, but also because the writer shows spark, imagination, and promise. For me, a winning story is passionate, clever, or memorable—not written simply as a homework assignment or to win a contest. The elements I looked for were: voice, story, character, creativity, energy, and stories with a message or moral without being preachy. To a lesser degree I considered the technical aspects of writing—like format, spelling, punctuation, etc, which are also very important. Just ask your English teachers.

 

If your story isn’t mentioned above, it doesn’t mean it’s not good. Judging a contest is like choosing a favorite ice cream flavor; some people prefer chocolate, others like strawberry, and a few crave tutti frutti. So, if your story was a "strawberry" and I was looking for "tutti fruti," blame it on my unusual taste, not your writing.

 

Here are a few suggestions to help make your writing stronger: 

* write, write, write (every day, if possible, and keep pen and paper handy; you never know when an idea might strike)

* read, read, read (books, magazines, newspapers, comic books, cereal boxes--anything)

* be sure and read your stories out loud before entering them in a contest (you will develop an "ear" for writing)

* don't rely on spell check when you write; spell check cannot distinguish between homonyms (like write and right)

* never, ever give up!!!

 

Congratulations to everyone who entered--I think you all already are winners. A huge thanks to all the teachers, principals, parents, and guardians for encouraging their teens to write and submit such wonderful stories!

 

Donna Volkenannt, 2007 Teen Short Story Contest judge

 

RESULTS OF THE FIFTH ANNUAL CHILDREN'S WRITING CONTEST

 

Doyle Suit has completed judging of the Third and Fourth grade children's writing contest. 

We received a total of 120 entries from nine different schools. From the 21 finalists, Doyle picked his top ten.

Here are his comments:

"The judging is complete. With so many good entries, I almost pulled out the rest of my hair. There were several close calls, and I could have awarded more of them. My hat's off to the kids and their teachers. Good Job! CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL THE ENTRANTS."

 

 
CHILDREN’S CONTEST WINNERS – 2007
 
  1. The Civil War Passage – by Matthew Lauer – Mrs. Elek, St. Peter School
  2. John and the Magic Acorn – by Haley Strand _ Mrs. Ratermann, All Saints School
  3. Danger In The Mine – by Nick Haney – Mrs. Ratermann, All Saints School
  4. Adventures Of Discovering Kid Land – Chandie Colclasure – Mrs. Elek, St. Peter School
  5. The map that John found – by Ellie Henry – Miss Mohan, All Saints School
  6. The Magic Arrowhead – by Michael O’Donnell – Mrs. Ratermann, All Saints School
  7. The Time Machine Malfunction – Lukas Mendel – Mrs. Ratermann, All Saints School
  8. The Key – by Joshua Mesler – Miss Mohan, All Saints School
  9. The Day The Principal Taught The Class – by Caitlan Hunter – Mrs. Hartweger, St. Peter School
  10. Guess Who I Met Yesterday! – by Alyssa Dobner-Klocke – Mrs. Ratermann, All Saints School
 

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Judges David Kirkland and Louella Turner have completed their selections of winners* of the 2007 short story contest.  

Congratulations to the top ten, as well as everyone who entered. 

And the top ten are:

1) "Dylan" by Emily Tipton Williams of Fort Worth, TX
2) "Ticket to Colorado" by Barbara Wagner of Leawood, KS
3) "Harvest Time" by June Venable of Georgetown, TX
4) "The Battle with Marilyn Monroe" by Teresa C. Vratil of Leawood, KS
5) "Mowed Flowers" by Teresa Hoy of Chilhowee, MO
6) "Life's Song List" by Judy Webb Brewster of Leawood, KS
7) "Lilly's Affliction" by Frances Hill Roberts of Belcamp, MD
8) "Dragan" by Mary Chandler of Reno, NV
9) "Westward with Hope" by Claudia Shelton of O'Fallon, MO
10) "The Start of Something Big" by Philip Loyd of Houston, TX

* Checks and/or certificates will be mailed by the end of the month.

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Saturday Writer’s 2007 One-Page Poem Contest Results

Thank you to all the poets who entered Saturday Writer’s 2007 One Page Poem Contest. With almost 100 entries, the competition was fierce and our judges reported that a pretty lively debate ensued to come to an agreement on the Top 10. So, without further ado—here’s is the list you’ve all been waiting for.

 Certificates to the top 10 and cash prizes to the top 3 will be mailed soon. Congratulations!

 

Top Ten

1) “How the Blues Can Bruise” by Adrain S. Potter of Minnetonka, MN

2) “Poem for my Dad” by Karen Sucharski of Colorado Springs, CO

3) “Radio Religion” by Judy Lee Green of Murfreesboro, TN

4) “A Lovely Ballet” by Donna Schenk of Evansville, IL

5) “A Visit to Her English Aunt” by Faye Williams Jones of North Little Rock, AR

6) “About Asking” by Catherine Moran of Little Rock, AR

7) “Dignity's Dirty Little Secret” by Ellaraine Lockie of Sunnyvale, CA

8) “Gifts of Love” by Patricia J. North of Clinton, WA

9) “Your Love” by Pat Wahler of St. Peters, MO

10) “Skirmish Sundown” by Ann Huguenin of Ava, MO

Notable Entries--in no particular order:

“Beginnings” by Ann Huguenin of Ava, MO

“Mom's Jazzy Quilts” by Faye Adams of De Soto, MO

 “Fireflies of the Manic Moon” by Carol Carpenter of Livonia, MI

 “Solar Power on the Prairie” by Ellaraine Lockie of Sunnyvale, CA

“Self” by April Lott of Minneapolis, MN

 “The Silence That Is Between Us”  by Jean Tupper of Wrentham, MA

“The Master” by Delia J. Fry of O’Fallon, MO

“Shirley” by Harriet Elkington of Sheridan, WY

“The Gardener”  by Harriet Elkington of Sheridan, WY

“Drinking From a Quart Jar” by Bill Tilley of Park Hills, MO

 “Mendocino Morning” by Ellaraine Lockie of Sunnyvale, CA

“Yearning” by Faye Adams of De Soto, MO

 “An Old Soldier Tells His Story” by Eva Ridenour of Armstrong, MO

“Sewing the Doll's Dress” by Cindy Tebo of Catawissa, MO

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2006 CONTEST RESULTS 

The winners in our annual teen writing contest have been selected.  Here are comments from judge, Mary Horner

"These young writers all seem to understand plot and character development, the basic elements of telling a story. Most have created a strong sense of time and place, and I can relate to the characters and their situations. Well done! I selected the best writing style, which can mean use of words and descriptions, and/or the ability to create a sense of urgency and tension. Also considered were strong opening paragraphs, how quickly and clearly did the story unfold, along with strong endings that tied up the loose ends. In addition, I asked myself the age-old question 'Do I care about these characters and what happens to them?' When all these elements came together in stories with the strongest plot lines, I found the winners.

"I have to say that there are elements in every single story that are worthy of mention. I hope these writers continueto edit and polish their stories because their work is worthwhile and meaningful. Each one is a winner in its own way."

Winners of the 2006 Teen Short Story Contest

1st place - "Behind the Guise" by Emily Moore of Christian High School
2nd place - "The Flying Sun" by Diana Koester of Duchesne High School
3rd place - "The Game" by Jack Gregg of Duchesne High School
4th place - "The Legend of the Mountain Gem" by Harry Nguyen of Duchesne High School
5th place - "Perfect" by Danny Horrell of Lutheran High School
6th place - "The Exodus" by James Rapp of Duchesne High School
7th place - "Dark Future" by Scott Feldt of Duchesne High School
8th place - "The Hollowing Heart" by Sarah Vohsen of Duchesne High School
9th place - "The Perfect Crime" by Katie White of Duchesne High School
10th place - "Jake's Dream" by Tyler Loewenstein of Duchesne High School

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Judging in our annual children's writing contest is complete.  Thanks to all students, teachers, parents, grandparents, and guardians who encouraged their young writers to put pen to paper and create their wonderful stories.

Judge Doyle Suit send the following comments about this year's submissions. 

"I found that all the stories had merit. The winners tended to have imaginative plots, lively language, complete story arc, and a few that included good descriptions of setting and sensory details. Most of the stories were appealing, and differences in score were small.  Congratulations to all the entrants. Selection of the top 10 is subjective in spite of objective standards."

Winners in the 2006 Children's Short Story Contest: 

1.   Jailene Maldanado, UNTITLED, Saint Peter School

2.   Alex Hopkins, TRICK OR TREAT, Saint Peter School

3.   Margaret Michalak, THE MAGIC PIECE OF CANDY, Saint Peter School

4.   Casey Bader, WHO'S AFRAID OF WHO?, Saint Peter School

5.   Eleanor Lercel, THE HALLOWEEN MYSTERY, Saint Peter School

6.   Michael Clarkson, FRIENDS AND FOURWHEELERS, Sacred Heart School

7.   Luke Prinster, SOCCER DOG, Saint Peter School

8.   James Clifton, UNTITLED, Saint Peter School

9.   Arienna Jasmine Gray, HOW CRYSTAL GOT HER PET PARAKEETS, Rebecca Boone School

10.  Zachary Gildehaus, CHAD'S MYSTERIOUS TREE HOUSE ADVENTURE, Sacred Heart School

 

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With more than 100 entries from dozens of states and Canada, many of the stories submitted in our fifth annual short story contest were very strong.  

Judges Amy Burle and Donna Volkenannt noted that each of this year's entries offered something that made the stories enjoyable to read--from memorable characters, a skillful turn of phrase, a clever plot twist, great description, a surprise ending, or just a feel-good story.  Thanks for sharing your stories with us.   Even if your name isn't among those listed below, you already are a winning writer because you've imagined a story, written it down, and entered it for judging.  And what a wonderful accomplishment that is!

Here is the list of our top 10 entries and their home towns, along with a list of 10 notable entries that got the judges attention.  

2006 Short Story Winners:

 1st place – “Sweet William’s Court” by Mary May Burruss of Cape Canaveral, FL

2nd place – “Fruit to Fruit” by Judy Lee Green of Murfreesboro, TN

3rd place – “Shaytl Lady” by Judith Groudine Finkel of Houston, TX

4th place – “The Storyteller 1836” by M. Carolyn Steele of Tulsa, OK

5th place – “A Cloud Over Kliklak” by Jerrel Swingle of O’Fallon, MO

6th place – “How the Devil Got My Parking Space” by Laura Loomis of Pittsburg, CA

7th place – “ Justifiable Brew Aside” by Barbara Anton of Sarasota, FL

8th place – “How Yolanda Saved Her Marriage” by Judith Dodd of Boiling Springs, SC

9th place – “The Tin Christmas” by Pat Clothier of Shawnee Mission, KS

10th place – “Alias” by Sharon Ervin of McAlester, OK

 Notable Entries (in no particular order):

 “Right Foot on the Floorboard Left Foot in the Grave” by John Bowlby of Colville, WA

“Legend of a New Name” by Patricia J. North of Clinton, WA

“Waiting at the Stop-N-Go” by Elaine Seger of Columbia, MO

“Necessary Things” by M. Carolyn Steele of Tulsa, OK

“The Road Ahead” by Roger Poppen of Cobden, IL

“Tilly’s Garden” by James F. Boyle II of St. Louis, MO

“Thumbtack Moon” by Judy Lee Green of Murfreesboro, TN

“Bruised Apples” by Debra Purdy Kong of Port Moody, BC Canada

“Cally’s Braid” by Sally S. Nalbor of Crown Point, IN

“When Passing the Possum” by Faye Williams Jones of North Little Rock, AR

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One-Page Poem Contest 2006 Winners List

 The results are in! This year’s poetry contest turned out to be another good one, with 124 entries coming from 21 different states. Each poem was judged blindly and read with care by our judges. And while not everyone can make our list of winners, each poem had something unique to offer the reader. I encourage you to keep submitting your poems to this and other contests and publications.

 Congratulations to our Top Ten and Notable Entries! Certificates and prizes will be mailed the first week of May.

 Top Ten

First place – “The Topography of Motion” by MARGARET HOEHN, Sacramento, CA
Second place – “Trail Signs” by ELLEN ELIZABETH, Bremerton, WA
Third place – “Home Hospice” by PAGE LAMBERT, Golden, CO
Fourth place – “Autumn in the Apple Orchard” by MARGARET HOEHN, Sacramento, CA
Fifth place – “In One Closet” by ELLEN ELIZABETH, Bremerton, WA
Sixth place – “In the Closet” by FAYE W. JONES, North Little Rock, AR
Seventh place – “Last Assignment” by MARIAN KAPLUN SHAPIRO, Lexington, MA
Eighth place – “Six Holes” by EDWARD BOCCIA, Webster Groves, MO
Ninth place – “Age” by VICKI STEVENS, Valles Mines, MO
Tenth place – “fighting words” by ADRIAN POTTER, Minnetonka, MN

Notable Entries
“Looking Up” by CLAUDIA SHELTON, O’Fallon, MO

“The Second Verse” by MARY BURRUSS, Cape Canaveral, FL

“Bobby and Me” by LENORA HOBBS, Foley, MO

“Runaway Bride” by ELLEN ELIZABETH, Bremerton, WA

“Cross Words” by SUE HOWELL, Carbondale, IL

“Waitress with Parkinson’s Disease” by ELLEN LAFLECHE, Northampton, MA

“For Steve: January 24, 2006” by SUE HOWELL, Carbondale, IL

“I Called Him Duke” by CARILLEE BURKE, Sarasota, FL

“Stacking Wood” by J.B. CHEANEY, Flemington, MO

“The Mortician’s Son” by RYAN VAN CLEAVE, Clemson, SC

“Before Hurricanes Had Names” by ELLEN LAFLECHE, Northampton, MA

“Pocketbook of a Female Serial Killer” by ELLEN LAFLECHE, Northampton, MA

“Tincture of Time” by JEAN TUPPER, Wrentham, MA

“Sky-View Artistry” by DONNA SCHENK, Evansville, IL

“Six A.M. St. Louis” by DONNA SPRINGER, St. Louis, MO

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Top 10 winners in our 2005 teen writing contest. 

Thanks to all 33 students who entered.


1st place - "A True Daily Double" by Lauren Manganelli, Francis Howell High School
2nd place - "The Mask" by Shannon Lampkin, Duchesne High School
3rd place - "The Harp" by Sarah Haas, Christian High School
4th place - "Louis and the Leaves" by Brian Ransom, Fort Zumwalt West Middle School
5th place - "The Best Christmas Gift" by Jessica Dill, Duchesne High School
6th place - "Wicked Lines" by Zach McCormack, Duchesne High School
7th place - "Understanding Daisy" by Megan Stein, Duchesne High School
8th place - "The Worth of a Lubber" by Hannah Bernhardt, Christian High School
9th place - "100 Yards" by Brendon Covilli, Duchesne High School
10th place - "Won't I" by Tori Champagne, Duchesne High School

A word about our judge: Amy Willoughby-Burle is a transplanted southern girl, living in Missouri with her husband and two young daughters. She has published pieces in both Potomac Review and Sycamore Review. In past years she worked for Tar River Poetry, a top rated literary publication in North Carolina and recently co-judged the Saturday Writers sponsored Creative Non-Fiction Award for the Ozark Creative Writers Conference.

Some comments from Amy:  Judging this teen contest was not only fun but difficult in the best of ways. Not only were the stories so different in style and theme, but each writer had his or her own strengths. This made for some great reads and a stuggle to arrive at a list of winners. I saw real talent and promise in these stories and I hope that each young person that entered this contest will continue to write.
Thanks,
Amy

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NOTES FROM OUR TEACHERS

Here's what some of the teachers whose students entered our children's writing contest wrote to Saturday Writers:

Thank you for inviting us to enter this contest.  This is the first Essay contest I've ever had a chance to enter.  I hope they meet your expectations.

Sincerely,

Stephanie Freymuth

Fourth Grade

Sacred Heart

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Thank you for the opportunity to have my students write "with a purpose."  They were very excited about the writing prompts and enjoyed putting their own personal spin on them.  The idea of each getting a certificate for entering was very appealing to them.  I hope you enjoy them as much as I did.

Sincerely,

Donna Pfizenmaier

4th grade teacher

Hawthorn Elementary

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 First of all, let me begin by thanking you for once again having your organization sponsor the third and fourth grade story writing contest.  It was a great experience for the third graders in my class at Saint Peter Catholic School, and I do appreciate the opportunity,

  I'm really excited that I had a winner from the kids in my class, and I plan to be at the awards ceremony on Saturday to wish her and also the boys from the fourth grade classes my best.       I'm looking forward to the awards ceremony this Saturday.  Again, thanks for a great contest! 

Mary Jeanne Elek, Third Grade Teacher, Saint Peter Catholic School

AND HERE ARE THE WINNERS: 

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The judging is now complete from our third annual children’s writing contest. 

 

Thanks to all 138 third and fourth grader students who entered.  Special thanks to the parents and teachers for encouraging these budding authors to write their thoughts on paper and share their stories with us.  Certificates and awards were presented uring our annual children’s meeting on Saturday, December 3, at the St. Peters Community and Cultural Arts Center. 

 

 

Here are the top ten stories, by title, author, teacher's name, and school: 

 

1. THE SCARY MYSTERY by Aaron Hollowell, Teacher: Mrs. Pfizenmaier, Hawthorn Elementary(4th grade)

2. COURTNEY AND THE HAUNTED HOUSE by Megan Stebbin, Teacher: Mrs. Freymuth, Sacred Heart

3. WHEN I OPENED THE DOOR by Jordan Stankoven, Teacher: Mrs. Tighe, All Saints School (3rd grade)

4. THE PRINCESS WHO LOST HER FATHER by Marcus Nicks, Teacher: Mrs. Freymuth, Sacred Heart

5. THE NIGHT I BECAME THE BRICKWALL by Molly Donovan, Teacher: Mrs. Tighe, All Saints School (3rd grade)

6. MONSTER WAR by Nick Thro, Teacher: Mrs. Arns, St. Peter Catholic School (4th grade)

7. INTO ANOTHER LIFE by Jeff Noonan, Teacher: Mrs. Hartweger, St. Peter Catholic School (4th grade)

8. CANDY LAND by Margaret Michalak, Teacher: Mrs. Elek, St. Peter Catholic School (3rd grade)

9. THE WERE WOLF by Shelby Dunn, Teacher: Mrs. Freymuth, Sacred Heart

10. MAGIC ONIONS by Daniel Oleson, Teacher: Mrs. Arns, St. Peter Catholic School (4th grade)

 

 

Here’s what our judge, Doyle Suit, had to say about all the wonderful stories submitted for the contest.  “All the stories had merit. There were at least twenty entries that had to be considered for the top ten.”

 

 

A few words about our judge:  Doyle Suit is a father and grandfather who lives in St. Charles.  Doyle wrote a few thousand pages of technical proposals while working as an engineer at McDonnell Douglas (now Boeing).  He speaks French (with the help of his wife, who he met while stationed in France).  Doyle also plays bluegrass with a family band and dabbles in songwriting. He has been published in the now defunct St.Charles Banner News, The St. Louis Suburban Journals, Storyteller Magazine, the Cuivre River Anthology, and other commercial and literary publications. Doyle is currently working on short stories and a novel. 

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2005 SHORT STORY CONTEST WINNERS

From President, Amy Harke-Moore:  Thanks to all who entered Saturday Writers 4th Annual Short Story Contest. Our judges, Donna Volkenannt and Lou Turner, chose these Top Ten and Notable Entries from among the 88 entries we received this year.


A note from the judges:  It was an honor to judge this year's contest. By submitting your story you showed you are serious about your writing and want to improve your craft.  Many of the stories in this year's competition were memorable.  Some were light and humorous, others dark and somber; some made us laugh out loud, while others moved us to tears or caused us to stop and think.  Each winning story had something special that set it apart from the others.  The stories that placed in the top ten and the notable entries had qualities such as: a unique voice, memorable characters, an intriguing story, strong writing, a dash of humor, or a splash of insight.  Many entries that did not make the final cut may have came close, but were missing something. A few entries weren't short stories, but were essays or narratives with no story arc.  The winning entries had the elements of a story: a beginning, a middle, and an end; strong writing, compelling characters, realistic dialogue, conflict, resolution, and lovely language.  The strongest stories showed rather than told--they painted pictures and scenes with words--and surprised and delighted us, as readers.  Congratulations to those writers whose work finished in the top ten or whose stories were recognized as notable entries.  Best of luck to everyone who entered, and we hope you will keep on writing and submitting.   It was a pleasure to read your work.    

AND THE TOP TEN ENTRIES ARE:
    First - "Fighting Instinct" by Adrian S. Potter of Minneapolis, MN
    Second - "The Removeds" by Eugene H. Bales of Savannah, MO
    Third - "Tilly and the Mouth Organ" by Mary Chandler of Rancho Santa Fe, CA
    Fourth - "God's Children" by Charlotte Ann Zuzak of Grove City, PA
    Fifth -  "Huley's Place" by Betty Wallace Kinser of Mountain View, AR
    Sixth - "The Venus Mysteria Show" by Laura Loomis of Pittsburg, CA
    Seventh - "The Morning After" by Richard Crowhurst of Lincolnshire, UK
    Eighth - "Mystic Crystal, Ancient Gold" by Jerrel Swingle of O'Fallon, MO
    Ninth - "Grandmother and the Home Baked Cookies" by Gayle B. Miller of Oklahoma City, OK
    Tenth - "Hello Neighbor" by Aaron Jacobs of Los Angeles, CA

Notable Entries

    "Jessica's Surprise" by Sally A. Roberts of Richardson, TX
    "Smoking is Hazardous to your Health" by Judith A. Gallardo of Bass Lake, CA
    "Dragan" by Mary Chandler of Rancho Santa Fe, CA
    "Thumping the Bible" by Brett Pransky of Reynoldsburg, OH
    "Waterproofing Dirt" by Michael Colonnese of Fayetteville, NC
    "The Living Winds" by Carole C. Douglas of Kansas City, MO
    "Two Shorts and a Long" by Julia Dee Lyle of Burlington Junction, MO
    "Gold Star" by Sue Howell of Carbondale, IL
    "Regret" by David Norton of Sacramento, CA
    "Roberto" by George J. Dirkers of Godfrey, IL
    "Homecoming" by Bob Jones of North Little Rock, AR
    "The Storyteller" by Myrna Beth Lambert of Glenview, IL
    "Triumph in Tragedy" by Barbara Anton of Sarasota, FL
    "Tattered Angel" by Betty Wallace Kinser of Mountain View, AR
    "Trampling Out the Vintage" by Jerry Abrams of Burleson, TX

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2005 poetry contest

Congratulations to everyone who entered the 2005 poetry contest.  There were more than 150 entries, so the competition was fierce. AND THE WINNERS ARE

1st place--  “Fiat Lux”                                               Catherine Moran
2nd place--  “Twilight”                                               Adam Cohen
3rd place--  “Unending Memory”                                    Candace Rice

Honorable Mentions

4th place--  “First Week of Physioball Class”                   Margaret Hoehn
5th place--  “Wishbone in Moonglow”                            Mary Langer Thompson
6th place--  “What Happened on Flat Creek. . .”               Aly Goodwin
7th place--  “April”                                            Jane M. Frutchey
8th place--  “Stretch Marks”                                  William Roetzheim
9th place--  “Morning Ritual”                                   Dulce Moore
10th place--  “The Suede Shoes”                               Diana Davis

Notable Entries

11th place--  “The Seventh Circle”                                    William Roetzheim
12th place--  “Fading into Background”                                William Roetzheim
13th place--  “The Return”                                            Louis E. Bougeois
14th place--  “A Talking Doll That No Longer Speaks”                Eileen Malone
15th place--  “Written Sitting In the Ruins of Old Sheldon. . ."      Aly Goodwin
16th place--  “Annie”                                                Brandy Mars
17th place--  “The Scent of Memories”                              Helen Hensley
18th place--  “Hole in the Sky”                                      Jerry Swingle
19th place--  “Words”                                               Helen Hensley
20th place--  “Happiest in London”                                   Emily Ward
21st place--  “Vintage Memory”                                      Maureen Lavender
22nd place--  “Driving Through Midnight”                             Margaret Hoehn
23rd place--  “Distance”                                             Arleta Witwer
24th place--  “Making Molasses”                                     Christy Lenzi
25th place--  “My Mother’s Hands”                                  Fayrene Mayes

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 Margo Dill did a wonderful job judging the 66 stories from third and fourth grade students in St. Charles, Lincoln, and Warren Counties.  Margo is a multi-published writer and winner of numerous writing contests.  She teaches in the Booneville School District. 

Here are the stories she selected as the best.

 2nd Annual Third and Fourth Grade Writing Contest

Sponsored by: Saturday Writers (a chapter of the MO Writer’s Guild)

And the Winners are . . .

    1st prize: Blue ribbon and $15 gift certificate to Borders

    2nd prize: Red ribbon and $10 gift certificate to Borders

    3rd prize: White ribbon and $5 gift certificate to Borders

   1st place: "Crazy Aunt Cloe" Cari O’ Donnell Mrs. Bushway Forest Park Elementary

    2nd place: "Henry the Hedgehog" Katie Eisenbath Mrs. Schlenke Assumption School

    3rd place: "The World’s Largest Pumpkin" Luke Joslin Mrs. Elek St. Peter School

    4th-10th prize: Green ribbons and Wonderful Writer Award Certificates

   4th place: "Was it Really a Dream?" Alexandra Dultz Mrs. Elek St. Peter School

    5th place: "Goober" Hannah Pipitone Mrs. Elek St. Peter School

    6th place: "The Leaf Burning" Lilly Boenker Mr. Gloe St. Alphonsus School

    7th place: "The Witch on the Block" Céile Cassidy Mrs. Lammert Assumption School

    8th place: "The Halloween Pumpkin!" Danielle Vassallo Mrs. Hartweger St. Peter School

    9th place: "Where is all my Halloween Candy?" Abby Wootten Mrs. Hartweger St. Peter School

    10th place: "Halloween Night" William Schneider Mrs. Elek St. Peter School

Special Recognition: Participation Ribbons and Wonderful Writer Award Certificates

   "The Big Surprise" Nick Braun Mrs. Elek St. Peter School

    "The Haunted Grave" Skylar __________ St. Alphonsus School???

    "Missouri to Space" Ellie Pohlman Mrs. Elek St. Peter School

                All entrants will receive a ribbon for participation.

Judge’s Note: We had 66 entries in our contest this year. Even if your students entered and did not win one of the first ten prizes or special recognition, they will receive a yellow participation ribbon. If your students can not attend the awards ceremony, their prizes will be mailed to you. Thank you for entering!!! The stories were wonderful!!!! I looked for creativity, complete stories, and original ideas.

 

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Winners of the 2004 Short Story Contest



1st place                      "Two Funerals" by Doyle Suit, St. Charles, MO
2nd place                      "The Homecoming" by Carol Chandler, Harrisburg, AR
3rd place                      "Snows of Lebanon" by Robert Walton, King City, CA
1st Hon Mention            "Sometimes, on Mondays" by Rick Jankowski, Tinley Park, IL
2nd HM                          "Regrets" by James R. Cooley, Kansas City, MO
3rd HM                      "Sweet Love Remembered" by Marian Blue, Clinton, WA
4th HM                      "Career Options" by Marsha Porter, Sacramento, CA
5th HM                     "Red, Blue and Not White" by Elizabeth Parker, Godfrey, IL
6th HM                     "Conventional Wisdom" by Tammy Wilson, Newton, NC
7th HM                     "Pony Boy" by Erv Bobo, Florissant, MO
8th HM                    "Give and Go" by Ed Mason, Kansas City, MO
9th HM                    "Eyes of the Heart" by Barbara Anton, Sarasota, FL
10th HM                      "Trade Day" by Kory Wells, Murfreesboro, TN
1st Notable Entry       "Isabella's Pond" by Carol E. Brown, Mountain Home, AR
2nd NE                    "Mom is a Palindrome" by Linda Maxwell, Richmond, KY
3rd NE                   "Relics" by Lee Ann Russell, Springfield, MO
4th NE                   "About Mamma" by Morgan Elliot, St. Louis, MO
5th NE                   "Mirrored Wishes" by Carol Michaels, Agawam, MA
6th NE                   "Suddenly Famous" by Jodie L. Ball, Arvada, CO
7th NE                   "Mistaken Identity" by Paul Alan Fahey, Nipomo, CA
8th NE                   "Rules Before Sense" by Warren Vickery, Edmonton, Alberta CANADA
9th NE                   "The Grail" by Joseph Shaffer, Albuquerque, NM
10th NE                     "Arramanche" by Sophie Broderick, London UNITED KINGDOM

Congratulations to everyone whose story was among those selected.

Checks will be sent to the top three winners by the end of October.  Certificates also will be mailed to top ten winners by the end of October. 

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Here are comments from some of the winners in the 2004 short story contest:

I received the award certificate for my story's third place finish in this year's contest.  It is an honor to have one's writing singled out from among many distinguished entries and I thank you for it.    Robert Walton, King City, CA

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I wanted to thank you and your organization for conducting the recent
short story contest and for publishing the list of honorable mentions and
honorable entries. As a writer, I find it so helpful to know that even
though I may not have placed first, second or third, my work is showing up
on the radar, so to speak. So many contests don't provide that type of
feedback. Your letter was also very encouraging. I appreciate your
organization taking the time and effort to recognize the work of so many
writers.
Kind regards,

Kory Wells,  Murfreesboro, TN
www.korywells.com

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Just saw the list of contest winners and I am dancing the Dance of Joy!
Whew - gotta catch my wind - Okay, I'm better now.

I'm very proud to have placed 4th (First Honorable Mention) in your contest.
As there is always room for improvement, I always ask -  If the judges or
anyone who read my story has suggestions as to how I can improve my writing, I am extremely open to them.

Have a great day - you just made mine!

Rick Jankowski
Chicago, IL

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2004 POETRY CONTEST SELECTED POEMS:

     
1) RICK WHO?  (Marianne Vincent; Syracuse, NY)

2) Homage to Soren Kierkegaard  (Louis E. Bourgeois; University, MS)

3) In Lacombe, Louisiana (Louis E. Bourgeois; University, MS)

4) Poem of Our Dissolution (Joy St. John-Johnson; Huntsville, AL)

5) Cabin Fever  (Catherine Moran; Little Rock, AR)

6) CUSHENDALL  (Elizabeth Parker; Waterloo, IL)

7) Biography (Joy St. John-Johnson; Huntsville, AL)

8) My Jewish Mother (Lynn Sadler; Sandord, NC)

9) Flight Notes (Eugene Bales; Savannah, MO)

10) The Gar in the Tub (Louis E. Bourgeois; University, MS)


NOTABLE ENTRIES (In alphabetical order of poem title)

Bird Woman's Visions (Virginia Fortner; Shawnee Mission, KS)
Black Ties and Fireflies (Chris Moyer; Ooltewah, TN)
Calling for James  (Alice Soules; Danville, CA)
Generations  (Pat Avery; Kimberling City, MO)
Green Slander (Jennifer Ostyn; Twin Falls, ID)
THE HOOK (Aly Goodwin; Spartenburg, SC)
Lamp Life  (Faye Williams-Jones; N. Little Rock, AR)
Las Putas de la Casa (Joan Yeagley; Stella, MO)
Onion Soup (Alice Soules; Danville, CA)
PULL ME FROM THE GROUND (Plea from a roadside cross) (Ed Wright, Jr.; St. Louis, MO)  
The Rider (Eugene Bales; Savannah, MO)
Searching for definition (Catherine Moran; Little Rock, AR)
Suspension of Disbelief (Marie Chewe-Elliott; St. Louis, MO)
A Teenage Girl's Request (Eugene Bales; Savannah, MO)
WAITING FOR MY BELOVED (Caroline LeBlanc; Adams, NY)

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Saturday Writers First Annual Third Grade Writing Contest

CONGRATULATIONS to everyone who entered the Saturday Writers First Annual Third Grade Writing Contest.  We had 17 WONDERFUL Fall stories entered.  Thanks to the parents and teachers who encouraged their third graders to write and submit their stories.  Special thanks to our judge, Ms. Margo Dill, who teaches writing to students in K-5 at Fairmont Elementary in St. Peters.   Ms. Dill said it was very hard to choose a winner.

And the winners are:

1.  Jacob Wilmes, "The Halloween Freakout," Mrs. Ballmann, St. Theodore School

2.  Brittany Marino, "The Odd Tree," Mrs. Lammert, Assumption School

3.  Alec Hacker, "Dragon Times, " Mrs. Pope, Twin Chimneys Elementary

4.  Brittany Beckett, "The Halloween Scare," Mrs. Elek, St. Peters Catholic School

5.  Cari O'Donnell, "Jesse's Halloween Story," Mrs. Martin, Forest Park Elementary

6.  Tyler Brettnacher, "Tyler's Fantastic Fall Ball Team, " Ms. Myer, Green Tree Elementary

7.  Emily Fitzgerald, "All About Autumn," Mrs. Neal, Assumption School

8.  Morgan Wagner, "The Scariest Night of My Life," Mrs. Pope, Twin Chimneys

9.  Allison Call, "The Magic Leaf, " Mrs. Lammert, Assumption School

10.  Dana Gileza, 'Mallory's First Soccer Season," Mrs. Wiant, Twin Chimneys

Participation Awards:

*Autumn Eaves, "More the Moose and the Mysterious Mushrooms," Mrs. Wiant, Twin Chimneys

*Jordan Garner, "Autumn of the Horses," Mrs. Oehmke, Twin Chimneys Elementary

*Nicholas Keeven, "The Life of a Leaf," Mrs. Ludwig, Sts. Joachim and Ann

*Jordan Shawkey, "The Scary Halloween," Ms. Meyer, Green Tree Elementary

*Audrey Arns, "Fall Days," Mrs. Meyer, Green Tree Elementary

*Shelby Palitzsch, "The Haunted Camp Sight," Ms. Meyer, Green Tree Elementary

*Amy Sweeney, "Happy Halloween!" Mrs. Linneman, Becky-David

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2003 Fiction contest

Congratulations and best wishes to all who submitted stories for Saturday Writers Second Annual Fiction contest.  Even if your story was not selected as one of the top ten, writing your stories and submitting them for judging are positive steps on the road to publication.   

With more than 100 entries from across the United States, and one from Canada, the competition in our second annual short story contest was intense.    Whether it was an intriguing title, a compelling character, a clever plot line, realistic or witty dialogue, a strong and unique voice, graceful description, or a surprise ending, all 102 stories had something to offer.  Each judge selected their top stories, then discussed each of the more than 20 finalists in detail before coming to consensus on the top ten.  The judges' final decisions were based on the effective combination of all the elements of a first-rate short story, along with the passion and unique voice of the storyteller. 

The highest rated stories touched or moved the judges in some way.   In addition to being well written, the final test of a winning story was:  Is this a story I will remember a year from now?   

The checks for the money winners and the certificates for all of the top ten stories were mailed in October. 

AND THE TOP TEN STORIES ARE:

1.  Rewind: The Boy Without Birthdays, Ed Wright, Jr. Brentwood, MO

2.  Play a Little Song, Joel M. Vance, Russellville, MO

3.  Accounting, Carolyn Moore, Tigard, OR

4.  Bottle Caps and Spanish Gypsies, Amy Burle, Warrenton, MO

5.  Scissor Man, Meta E. Lee, Davie, FL

6.  The Kearney Legend, Erv Bobo, Florissant, MO

7.  In Hiding, Lauren Hilger, Allendale, NJ

8.  The Old Man, Florence Baurys, San Antonio, TX

9.  The Leaping Bavarians, Lisa Swanstrom, Port Hueneme, CA

10. Proteus Syndrome, Reggie J. Poche’, Garyville, LA

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2003 One-Page Poem Contest Results

Poets from 17 states and Canada submitted more than 90 poems in the first annual Saturday Writers One-Page Poetry Contest. In accordance with the contest rules, each poet could submit only three poems, all submitted poems were to be accompanied by appropriate fees and to be unpublished at time of submission, and poets would retain all rights to publication.

Poems were submitted from: Missouri (37), Illinois (9), New Jersey (8), California (6), New York (6). Between 1-3 poems were submitted from poets in: Alabama, Arizona, Arkansas, Georgia, Tennessee, Maryland, Massachusetts, Ohio, Oklahoma, and South Carolina, Texas, Wisconsin, and Canada.

Prize amounts awarded: First Place, $100; Second Place $50, Third through Seventh Places $10 each, Eighth, Ninth, and Tenth Honorable Mention certificates. All top ten poems were recognized with a certificate.

Judges Amy Harke-Moore and David "Kirk" Kirkland selected the following as the top ten poems. (The titles of the poems are as shown on the entries):

1. My Mother Does Not Weep, Lottie E. Porch, Hackensack, NJ

2. FINALITY, C.J. Clark, Hardy, AR

3. Cotes-du-Nord, Kaavya Viswanathan, Franklin Lakes, NJ

4. Letters from April, Kaavya Viswanathan, Franklin Lakes, NJ

5. Inheritance 2*, Lottie E. Porch, Hackensack, NJ

6. Gim’me some Soul, David Silverstein, Sands Point, NY

7. Coffee Break, Frederick T. Williams, St. Louis, MO

8. Untitled, Sarah D. Bunting, New York, NY

9. INSINUATION OF WINGS, Eileen Malone, Broadmoor/Colma, CA

10. Family Reunion, Elaine Derendinger, Franklin, MO

* Two poems were received with the title Inheritance, so the number "2" was added by the contest chair to distinguish between the poems.

Notable Entries. The following poems were selected as contest finalists by at least one of the judges:

Uncle Harry Gets His Wings, Carol Papenhausen (Knoxville, TN)

Angel @ Club Mave, Lauren Hilger (Allendale, NJ)
Kryptonite, Ezekiel Jarvis (Milwaukee, WI)

Several Silent Sorrys, Dr. Jim Wilson (Abileen, TX)
Imperfect, Kaavya Viswanathan (Franklin Lakes, NJ)
From the Third Floor Balcony, Roselyn Mathews (Waterloo, IL)

Yellow Fences, Nadine Breslo (Torrance, CA)
SONG AND DANCE, Bartie Jones (St. Louis, MO)
Passenger-side Scenario, JoAnn Ridings (Durant, OK)
I long, Rachelle Hosty (St. Charles, MO)
MOUNTAIN CLIMB, Bartie Jones (St. Louis, MO)
HIDDEN THERE, Patricia North (St. Joseph, MO)

Judges Bios

Amy Harke-Moore lives and works on her family's farm in rural Missouri. She's won multiple awards in poetry, including the Seven Oaks Publishing Company Poetry Award; Byline Magazine Haiku Contest; Springfield Writers Guild Haiku Contest; and North Texas Professional Writers Association Poetry Award. Her work has appeared in The MacGuffin, Permafrost, Grit, and Writers' Journal. Currently she is editor of the guild's newsletter, Saturday Writers.

David Kirkland lives in St. Charles, has multiple credits for both short fiction and poetry, and is the Treasurer for the Missouri Writers Guild. More information is available at his writer Website:
www.davidleekirkland.com

Judges’ Comments

Amy Harke-Moore: I’d like to take this opportunity to thank you for entering the poetry contest. I enjoyed judging the contest. To me, it’s like receiving a present even though it’s not a holiday—bringing home a folder stuffed full of poems to read!

While it inevitably comes down to those who placed and those who didn’t, I’d like to encourage those of you who didn’t win to keep on keeping on. Poetry selections often come down to personal taste. What strikes a chord with one person might not with another. Kirk and I found ourselves in this predicament with several of the poems.

Speaking personally, all 90 entries had something to offer, whether a well-chosen word or phrase, a title that invited me to read on, or something to think about in the course of my day. I would also like to add, that any time a writer makes the effort to enter a contest or submit a work for publication, it is never a waste of time. It’s how we learn and grow and strive to write better things.

Keep writing, keep reading, and keep entering.

David "Kirk" Kirkland: First, thank you for entering. Being a judge is always interesting, providing the opportunity and impulse not merely to consider which works are viewed as being the top contenders but to develop cogent critiques and arguments to sway others. This contest spurred an unusually lively debate between judges.

Why? Ah, in the end for poetry once past the art and all the craft there is still the matter of voice, of being spoken to; poetry can resonate at a level different than is usually touched by essay or fiction. This year, certain entries received sharply different scoring in the preliminary reviews, and that became the subject of spirited (though friendly) contention.

If I were to offer only a single word of advice, it would be this--proofread. In a line of poetry the difference between 'real' and 'realm' is enormous. Beyond that most obvious suggestion, however, one more--try reading your work aloud.

Why? Because the judges did. The eye too easily misses what the ear will detect, sound conveying an impression that includes rhyme and meter but going beyond that, to the creation of mood in speaking the words. Give voice to the voice of your work by reading it aloud, listening for sounds jarring to the mood of the poem. This year, for example, a storm arose over the word cubicle as the judges read aloud. Word choice is important not merely for meaning but also both for what is evoked and the sound of the word where used.

To our winners, congratulations! To everyone else--do not be disheartened. Persistence is for us all the cardinal virtue, and all of us have the experience of near-misses and rejections--but our craft improves, our ear becomes more sensitive, and our expression more evocative. We are writers, and--more than writers--poets.

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2002 Fiction Contest

RESULTS

A total of 34 writers from nine states and Canada submitted 47 manuscripts in the first annual Fiction 2002 Writing Contest. Writers from Missouri submitted 29 stories, Arkansas 5, Virginia 3, Illinois 2, Massachusetts 2, California 2, Georgia 1, Maine 1, New Jersey 1, and Canada 1.

Contest was judged "blindly," i.e. the writer’s name did not appear on the manuscript. Judge Julie Earhart has a master of fine arts degree from the University of Missouri-St. Louis. She has written for Saint Louis Events Magazine, the St. Louis Public Library, The Tunica Times, and The Historic Daniel Boone Home and Boonesfield Village, and has been a reviewer of fiction for the St. Louis Post-Dispatch, The Charlotte Austin Review, Booksights (in the UK) and Amazing Authors Showcase.

Julie first read through all the manuscripts and eliminated those that didn't follow basic fiction mechanics. Her second read was devoted to how well the craft was utilized and the strength of the story being told. The third read and deciding factors were: How well were conflict peaks handled? Do I want to read more of this story, yet be satisfied with the story on its own? Would I give this to someone else to read? Using these criteria, she selected the following manuscripts as the top ten. Also listed are the writers’ names and states.

1.  Hoot Greerson, David Kirkland, Missouri

2.  Memories and Magnolias, Luella Turner, Missouri

3.  The Mailbox, Linda H. Hoagland, Virginia

4.  Dancin' is Good for the Soul, Luella Turner, Missouri

5.  The Day Booger Johnson Died, Neil Chandler, Arkansas

6.  The Pied Piper of Saint Charles County, Tim Hammack, Missouri

7.  Little Green Men, Luella Turner, Missouri

8.  Broccoli and Cheese Cake, Kim Kiker, Missouri

9.  The Shopping Trip, Linda H. Hoagland, Virginia

10.  La Toya's Downtown Day, Patricia Moore, Illinois

Thanks to everyone who entered the contest. With almost 50 manuscripts, the competition was very strong. Regardless if your story was in the top 10 or not, everyone who entered is a "winner" for following your passion of writing and submitting to contests. Best of luck in all your future writing endeavors.

Donna Volkenannt, President


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